critique - if you pleasszz

[Jraun]

I'm working towards a logo -which we will use on t-shirts, etc...
Thoughts on image - dedrived from original! Q

[Michaelmjc]

I like it, very simple looking.. It would make a good logo.

[Carzee]

Nah. Too much. I don't know whether its a trucking company or a window maker or a commercial property agent........ regardless, its way too much.

Stick to happy faces or caricatures of happy faces - cliche but successful.

[Jraun]

Thanks Mike,
Yu can see where I removed some objects! Which did effect the results! Trying some text effects - thanks for the comments!

[Jraun]

Yes, See what you mean! Trucking company or window maker - not defined and way to much wanted to cut down but mind over ruled the reality of my hollow being – great sense of reality - thanks

[the.digital.guy]

It's "Simple" for a Logo; but could use some more "Thought".
Just keep thinking............

[Jraun]

Yes, searching for Idea - will do that - Thanks fo tha coments!
Plan on running it through another process to clean up some more!
Ciao