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chunkst3rz
10th of August 2009 (Mon), 14:22
What Can I Do To Improve on This Shot?

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mattyb240
10th of August 2009 (Mon), 14:48
I wish I could see the top of the exploding firework, theres alot of interesting features to this photograph! Good job!

hawkeye60
10th of August 2009 (Mon), 14:56
I'd crop some off the bottom.

gonzogolf
10th of August 2009 (Mon), 14:57
You've done a very good job of capturing the burst. However to make fireworks photos interesting you almost always have to have some sort of frame context. You've included foreground on this one but it appears that there isnt much going on to include which can be tough. I always try to frame the shot so it includes a familiar building or something to show scope and scale. Luckily here the two major displays are fired near the capitol building or over the lake, but allow foreground or background objects for context.