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dawnkyung
11th of August 2009 (Tue), 17:24
I decided to try taking a few pics of myself, so I slapped on my most emo face and went at it.

http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a321/ayamisuka/IMG_1267.jpg

http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a321/ayamisuka/IMG_1302.jpg

http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a321/ayamisuka/IMG_1250.jpg

I'm also cutting all my hair off tomorrow, so I wanted to document it also :P

Any help would be appreciated. I like making blk & whites and I'd like to improve.

jetcode
11th of August 2009 (Tue), 20:37
Very nice compositions #1, #2. #3 is fine too.

#1
The arm on left side could be printed down a bit and the face equalized a bit.
#2
Consider playing with cropping for the extraneous bits in the far edges

dawnkyung
11th of August 2009 (Tue), 20:43
Thank you for your feedback, it's very appreciated!

joedlh
12th of August 2009 (Wed), 11:37
Yep. #1 and 2 are definitely EMO. Suggest sending them to a band for their CD cover. However, I think you need more room under your chin on #2.

For #3, I suggest flipping the image so that one can read the "Canon".