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danieltr
17th of May 2005 (Tue), 04:52
Here is some shots, I need your inputs to improve...
Thank you
Daniel Tremblay
Les Coteaux, Quebec, Canada
http://danielphotos.blogspot.com
kenyc
17th of May 2005 (Tue), 05:26
Hi Daniel, nice pics. I'm far from an expert, but I'm working hard to learn more.
I'm a sucker for old barns, abandoned houses, etc so I love that pic but it seems to need a little "punch" or something, brighter color or contrast. Seems a bit washed out.
The sunset/sunrise pics are cool (I'm a sucker for them as well). It might help to add some object to the foreground to provide an interest/focal point.
Nice work!
KAC
danieltr
17th of May 2005 (Tue), 05:35
Thank you for your inputs, really appreciated.
Daniel
ajbalazic
17th of May 2005 (Tue), 12:31
Very nice shots. You have a good eye for sunset photo's. The first Magog shot doesn't do much for me.. the shot is split 50/50 sky and ground. In this case perhaps 1/3 sky and 2/3 ground would have helped. Also, the sunset at Les Coteaux is teriffic but the frame ruins it for me. That said, you obviously have some natural talent. Wait till you get your dslr, then you'll have some real fun!
PhotosGuy
17th of May 2005 (Tue), 22:15
The 1st one is very static. I'd have moved R or L a bit to make it more dynamic. Good start - keep it up!
Bob_A
17th of May 2005 (Tue), 22:51
I like the possibilities with the barn photo. In PS try auto levels, then under Saturation move the slider all the way to the left to turn it to a B&W photograph. For me this really worked with your image.
Regards,
Bob
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