first senior portrait job...(2nd attempt)

[fitz]

i kinda got rushed on this one but things came out good i think....here's 3 of 70 proofs

http://www.pbase.com/sfitz/image/43465537.jpg


http://i.pbase.com/u26/sfitz/large/43465539.IMG_5163a.jpg
http://i.pbase.com/u26/sfitz/large/43465539.IMG_5163a.jpg

http://www.pbase.com/sfitz/image/43465541.jpg
http://i.pbase.com/u26/sfitz/large/43465541.IMG_5181a.jpg

he showed up 45 minutes late and to a 7.30am apointment and had to be done by 9.30 - squeezed of 200 shots though, 70 of which i was pleased to show as proofs...

[Dante King]

nice work, but I see only 2 proofs.

[pdrow]

I only see two as well. I really like the 2nd one (I think it is supposed to be your third one based on the red x) as I like the angle and location of the the crop. It is very sharp and contrasty, too. On the first one, the crop at the bottom is a little akward to me. I think if you did a tighter crop instead of just above his feet. Also, his head seems to get a little lost in the shadows of the corner. Being rushed always makes it hard. You did a very nice job, though.
pam

[Citizensmith]

Second one is great. Good work