Critique for some pieces I'm putting on display

[trentchau]

Hi there, there's a little local show in Atlanta in October, and I decided to display a new set called "Lost in the Woods" there. It's pretty much simple photos of a female model (all friends in this case) in the woods.

I'm interested in what peoples opinion, criticism, and reaction is.

First off


Imagine these printed at 16x20 or bigger on Canvas
Prints for sale will be 16x20 on matte paper
Thank you ahead of time everyone.

First piece is

Maryn -

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2546/3863595395_fc33687acd_b.jpg

Second piece is Helen

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3549/3776272165_f58dab74de_b.jpg - NSFW WARNING

[ann-mom]

very nice work I love both of them but could not study the second (kids in the room). on the first if you could maybe make the light at the center top just a little less bright I think it would help. Now keep in mind I know nothing lol.