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Evil_Edge
5th of September 2009 (Sat), 13:13
Took these yesterday and would like some feedback. Thanks for looking.

1.
http://adampostma.zenfolio.com/img/v3/p481270179-4.jpg
2.
http://adampostma.zenfolio.com/img/v3/p82760238-4.jpg
3.
http://adampostma.zenfolio.com/img/v1/p28833041-4.jpg
4.
http://adampostma.zenfolio.com/img/v4/p18171658-4.jpg
5.
http://adampostma.zenfolio.com/img/v3/p227792742-4.jpg
6.
http://adampostma.zenfolio.com/img/v2/p62871266-4.jpg
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http://adampostma.zenfolio.com/img/v4/p171736991-4.jpg
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http://adampostma.zenfolio.com/img/v4/p394361263-4.jpg
TheLaird
5th of September 2009 (Sat), 14:05
I like the stairwell and the window shots. The stiarwell for the angle and conversion, the first couple of window shots for the light and the last for the green of the trees on the wall.
Flo
5th of September 2009 (Sat), 15:14
Really fabulous series..I am drawn to the third and the last.colors are just great.
spinney
5th of September 2009 (Sat), 15:17
I can feel the coolness and smell the musk! Nice connection to the subject.
mikekelley
5th of September 2009 (Sat), 15:41
Three would be great with a person under the light. Or something. Gotta utilize that awesome light.
Grimlock
5th of September 2009 (Sat), 16:32
Cool set. I think you did a good job!
Evil_Edge
5th of September 2009 (Sat), 21:53
Thanks so much everyone! It's taken some time, but I think I have finally found my "thing" I am really enjoying these types of shoots. there are many more of this particular shoot. If you'd like to see them, just ask ;)
Evil_Edge
5th of September 2009 (Sat), 23:47
Three would be great with a person under the light. Or something. Gotta utilize that awesome light.

how about this?

http://adampostma.zenfolio.com/img/v1/p432620677-4.jpg
ougrad02
5th of September 2009 (Sat), 23:53
I love #3 with the light coming through the ceiling. Great work.
eland23
5th of September 2009 (Sat), 23:53
these are sweet good set!
ImageMogul
6th of September 2009 (Sun), 01:20
how about this?

http://adampostma.zenfolio.com/img/v1/p432620677-4.jpg

"Norman! Bring me my chair!..." Grunge it up a bit more and you've got an excellent "Psycho" sort of shot (not that what you have wouldn't suffice just fine). Very nice series. Good eye for subject and composition. I might do some crop work on a few to add focus, but they display very nicely as is. Good job!

Regards,
Mark
whiteeagle1963
7th of September 2009 (Mon), 02:12
I like this series. Very Diane Arbus-ish. Well done.