First "real" photoshoot with my girlfriend and my car

[shortpballer]

Hey I got some strobing equipment and this is the first "real" photoshoot I've done. Let me know what you guys like and what you don't.

#1
http://www.kathydesi.com/photography/carshoot1.jpg
#2
http://www.kathydesi.com/photography/carshoot2.jpg
#3
http://www.kathydesi.com/photography/carshoot3.jpg
#4
http://www.kathydesi.com/photography/carshoot4.jpg
#5
http://www.kathydesi.com/photography/carshoot5.jpg

[Phunky Phong]

Pretty girl and nice car! Good job man

[klynam]

backgrounds on the first two are killing you - like the last three better - nice job overall - cars are tough to shoot...

[team haymaker]

there is some harch shadows on her face in the first 2. the third is great in my eyes except for that light and stand. and you may want to take a closer look at the last one. you can se something there that she may not wish be shown. hand placement would have been the key to this shot

[Evil_Edge]

I agree with the backgrounds comment. Also, we need to see more of the car, I'm guessing that is what the main subject is supposed to be? I would also recommend having her remove the nose ring or perhaps put a stud in. Not trying to be disrespectful, just my opinion.

[beano]

I've decided not to comment on your photo's as i'm so jealous and think i might actually hate you..... :p








Na, just kidding (i think!?!).. These are really nice, especially for you 1st try. I think they'd be better with late afternoon/early evening light, and have to agree with the background comments. I like the nose ring personally, but like EE said "It's a personal thing". ;)

[Jaewhy]

liking last 2

[Chris.]

Here are my opinions
#1&2 have harsh shadows.
#3 I can live with the lights showing but Id rather not see them.
#4 Also the picture would be way better if the light stand wasn't in the shot.
The water spots are killing it for me.
Good pictures otherwise.
My favorite is #5