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dannym
23rd of May 2005 (Mon), 18:52
I would very much appreciate your critique and feedback on this image. I'm trying to improve my technique and editing abilities. Have also included the original shot for comparison. This was taken at a car show last weekend. Thanks in advance for you assistance. Feel free to edit and repost here.

http://users.adelphia.net/%7Edanny_mullins/images/prettygirl.jpg

http://users.adelphia.net/%7Edanny_mullins/images/prettygirloriginal.jpg
Vetteography
23rd of May 2005 (Mon), 18:55
What a pretty girl... Nice shot, very sharp!
Jraun
23rd of May 2005 (Mon), 19:05
Classy Lady in a Classy Car - both Great! Reflection - Color - Composition - Subject! Closer crop - leaving the green (background) out totally!
hollow
24th of May 2005 (Tue), 06:32
not much to critique :)

well, in the first one I would try to reduce a little the saturation of Red channel (except the lips).

second one is beautiful.

oh, and of course the model is pretty :)
rssfhs
24th of May 2005 (Tue), 06:35
The whites in the original seem blown out, but in the cropped version it's not a problem. Nice model!
MAD DOG
25th of May 2005 (Wed), 07:22
Look very good to me.