View Full Version : just learning please critique
Wayne Wood
24th of May 2005 (Tue), 20:38
I'm just learnig about shooting flowers please tell me what you think, I'm not good at post processing so all I have done to these is crop and resize , oh yeah shot with Canon S1 IS
http://img282.echo.cx/img282/7485/img34882fb.jpg
http://img270.echo.cx/img270/4664/img35226gt.jpg
henleg
24th of May 2005 (Tue), 21:11
Very nice subject. Gorgeous, vibrant colours. I would try playing with the dof a bit more. chose one flower in the bunch ofthe first photo, to be the main subject (ie have one flower in focus, over the rest), and the same with the centre of the flower in the second.
Also, try playing with the aperture a bit more, or the shutter speed.
Henny. :)
SuzanneCarey
24th of May 2005 (Tue), 21:48
I think the one with water drops in it is great! yeah, I too like to see a nice blur around a flower. But I think these work too!
PhotosGuy
25th of May 2005 (Wed), 08:53
#1 I'd try using a white card to bounce some light into the blossoms at the bottom, + move left or in to get rid of the distracting green at the top-right.
#2 Try to MF on the center & use a smaller # f-stop to throw the background more OOF.
Both are nice, though.
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