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MelonieDawn
29th of September 2009 (Tue), 15:39
c&c welcome, pls be gentle!
Im very new to this

My 6month old daughter:

1.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2446/3964787683_ed42035832.jpg

2.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3426/3965557142_30a4632895.jpg

3.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3519/3965556232_b69e71a5f1.jpg

4.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2455/3964781387_82dc095d60.jpg

5.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2661/3964777201_6191ee2c7c.jpg

6.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3533/3964776115_cabcaf17c6.jpg

7.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2505/3965546066_f89dd30570.jpg

jenirose3
29th of September 2009 (Tue), 20:06
6 is adorable!

cdrumeller
30th of September 2009 (Wed), 00:20
its a good 1st start, she is an adorable model. I would like to edit some but you don't have image editing ok enabled is it ok?

my honest critique (i hate harsh critique myself) work on your composition, #4 would have been pretty good if you didn't cut off her hand and #1 without the flowers, do you have another one without the flowers covering her cheek?

MelonieDawn
30th of September 2009 (Wed), 01:17
thank you!

im open to editing, how would i enable that? i have a few different flower ones ill post as soon as i edit and convert them from RAW. To be quite honest i find the orchids a bit cheesy for this type of picture (i had them in a vase in my dining room) but many of my non-photog friends liked that one, so i threw it in.

azpix
30th of September 2009 (Wed), 01:36
#1 is great. expression is awesome. what is that material?

Maureen Souza
30th of September 2009 (Wed), 01:59
thank you!

im open to editing, how would i enable that? i have a few different flower ones ill post as soon as i edit and convert them from RAW. To be quite honest i find the orchids a bit cheesy for this type of picture (i had them in a vase in my dining room) but many of my non-photog friends liked that one, so i threw it in.
Go into your sig and turn on the Editing Okay button.

Welcome! Your daughter is adorable!

MelonieDawn
1st of October 2009 (Thu), 01:01
done, and thank you!:)

jimsuy
1st of October 2009 (Thu), 01:50
#2 for me... nice...

swimchic
2nd of October 2009 (Fri), 11:33
I'd love to play with them a little later if I get time too :) Fun fun! What a cutie! I really like #3, 6 & 7, but agree that they need a little editing to really pop :)
I have that same blanket too - love it to death!

swimchic
2nd of October 2009 (Fri), 14:27
I got my blanket at Ikea
Anyway - here's my go at it - thanks for letting us play :)
I think the angles were a little hard to work with - but I don't think it's as noticeable when you crop it in. When you are working with babies, you should pretty much be laying on your stomach on the ground, that will give you the best angle for straight on, here you were a little high, like you were only sitting on the ground. Anyway - I ran them through RAW and boosted the exposure a little, then ran them through curves a few times, and boosted the color with curves & hue/sat - HTH :)

http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f272/swimchicjen/3964776115_cabcaf17c6_edit.jpg

http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f272/swimchicjen/3965546066_f89dd30570edit.jpg

On this second one my edit is a little orange, just 'cause I was working with such a small image - but that would be easy to tone down with selective hue/sat

MelonieDawn
5th of October 2009 (Mon), 23:31
thanks looks great.

No lighting, just natural light around 4pm in the shade in my backyard