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Tigerkn
1st of October 2009 (Thu), 01:59
This is not a HDR, I PPed it from 1 photo. Please let me know what you think and help me to improve it. Thx.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3457/3971295674_12740cc022_b.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3465/3973952196_c962be4ab8_b.jpg
lindsaytblum
1st of October 2009 (Thu), 09:07
Hi! Composition-wise, this is a very interesting photo, with a lot going on to keep the attention of the viewer. The horses, the mountains, even the sky is very pretty. I would (1) clone out the yellow box thing on the right side of the photo and (2) reduce the vignette, it is pretty strong here.
Tigerkn
1st of October 2009 (Thu), 09:40
Thanks for the comment and advice Lindsaytblum. I will PP it again tonight.
I took -1, 0, +1 of the photo and I wish I can do HDR with PS E7 :(
bianson
1st of October 2009 (Thu), 09:42
Very nice!! I agree that the vignette is just a little strong. Great photo.
Flo
1st of October 2009 (Thu), 11:02
Lovely..I totally agree about the vignette.it doesn''t need it. I has a yellowish hue to it.maybe its just my eyes..
caught14
1st of October 2009 (Thu), 12:25
Love the shot! If you remove the vignetting as others have mentioned and adjust the WB, I think you'll have yourself a winner!
aroundlsu
1st of October 2009 (Thu), 12:42
Not to keeping beating a dead horse, but you need to remove the vignetting. It's so distracting I can't critique the rest of the photo.
Tigerkn
1st of October 2009 (Thu), 13:43
Thanks Bianson, Flo, Caught14 and Aroundlsu. I will try to make it better tonight.
24alpha
1st of October 2009 (Thu), 19:42
Apart from the Vignetting issue, I also feel the image needs straightening. When looking at it I feel like I am sloping down hill. Worth looking at IMHO.
Tigerkn
2nd of October 2009 (Fri), 00:55
I re-edited the photo to fix the Vignetting issue also cloned out the yellow box, the orange fence in the FG plus straightening it as 24alpha pointed out. Please let me know what you think. Thank you all again. Kevin.
The Hard Way
2nd of October 2009 (Fri), 01:23
I like the latest version much more than the original. Nice job!
lebshiff21
2nd of October 2009 (Fri), 09:11
Very nice edit.
Flo
2nd of October 2009 (Fri), 10:51
Much better!!!:D
LeuceDeuce
2nd of October 2009 (Fri), 11:50
The 2nd version is miles better. Well done.
vpnd
3rd of October 2009 (Sat), 01:21
likey
kathybanfield
3rd of October 2009 (Sat), 08:11
I really don't have enough experience to comment on the technical aspects, but this shot makes me want to visit that spot. I love it....
jack lumber
3rd of October 2009 (Sat), 12:25
Great job on the edit IMHO!!, the image has the feel of pristine wilderness, and to me that is somewhat spoiled by the blue barrel, and the traffic sign to the right.
Kathy you have validated this shot with that statement!!
Tigerkn
3rd of October 2009 (Sat), 16:49
Thanks for the good word everyone. Anyone need to know this location, let me know. I will take you there.
Flo
3rd of October 2009 (Sat), 18:25
Thanks for the good word everyone. Anyone need to know this location, let me know. I will take you there.
I want to go now:D;)
jgrussell
3rd of October 2009 (Sat), 21:58
+1 for the second version.
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