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craiglee
3rd of October 2009 (Sat), 20:20
something i wanted to do for a while

http://i38.tinypic.com/wrykwo.jpg

SAB_Click
4th of October 2009 (Sun), 03:44
Sorry - Doesn't work for me. The net seems out of place with a runner. The running looks staged. The crop line at the top feels very painful.

JEmerson
4th of October 2009 (Sun), 04:28
I'm going to agree with SAB_Click, the running and dirt being kicked up looks fake.The level of underexposure and vignetting are a little to high for my tastes.

But I really like the Black and white-style of the photo, but the whole thing does follow a bit of a cliche.

craiglee
4th of October 2009 (Sun), 04:59
god dang it! i'm a failure.

SAB_Click
4th of October 2009 (Sun), 05:09
god dang it! i'm a failure.

No you're not. It's a lot better than most people with a camera could do. Take a good hard look at it and list five things that could be improved and then shoot it again, then you'll have a great picture - easy! ;)

chadgeek
4th of October 2009 (Sun), 17:02
I think seeing more of the runner's waist would be nice, and I would take out the motion blur by the feet. This is the kind of image I see on some of the stock photo sites (like istockphoto) but please don't take that as a negative. There is a market for this type of symbolic and processed shots. Not a failure at all!