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Nistelrooydude
4th of October 2009 (Sun), 12:19
Here's just one from my fairly recent trip to the Canary Islands in Spain. I just saw this sitting outside of a restaurant and decided to get a quick shot. C&C is highly appreciated.

http://hrephoto.smugmug.com/photos/669847185_9ouVs-L.jpg

PhotosGuy
5th of October 2009 (Mon), 09:43
Interesting shot. I might have replace the tissue with a bottle that's out of the frame & put the straw toward the lower left.

DerekSimon
5th of October 2009 (Mon), 10:19
Creative shot... just not doing much for me. I think removing the napkin and straw would help. As it is now, it just has the "bottles headed for the recycling bin" appeal.

Nistelrooydude
5th of October 2009 (Mon), 23:57
Thanks for the input guys. Yeah, I probably should have moved some of the trash around; the symmetry and lines are kind of broken up by the napkin.

mosesport
6th of October 2009 (Tue), 11:21
I'm thinking a shot looking straight down at the bottles would have been do. Would have given it more of a patterning (is that a word?) effect.

songbirdsecrets
7th of October 2009 (Wed), 18:00
the 7-up bottle doesn't stand out enough, maybe if the bottles were a bit more like each other then it'd make the green one pop. right now it's too much at once

Nistelrooydude
11th of October 2009 (Sun), 10:35
Thanks again guys.