View Full Version : A days shooting in manchester (4images)
monkey_wrench
31st of May 2005 (Tue), 13:01
not all of people but would love critique on these thanks :D
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v608/tatton/IMG_4793-1.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v608/tatton/IMG_4787-1.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v608/tatton/IMG_4796-1.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v608/tatton/CRW_4759-1.jpg
monkey_wrench
31st of May 2005 (Tue), 15:11
nada??
Big_B
31st of May 2005 (Tue), 15:18
I really like the first one. Since you asked for crit, I'm slightly distracted by the sticking out part of his collar and the logo on the window (far right). Perhaps a small crop? On the other hand it would be a shame to loose the bridge in the background.
I kinda like his reflection in the window, although I can't quite put my finger on why. Perhaps because showing part of his face makes me wonder what I'm missing in the rest?
The others don't do anything for me though I'm afraid. However, those sort of photos aren't really my style so you may wish to ignore me :)
BlueTit
31st of May 2005 (Tue), 15:18
Just getting here now! Great photos, I love the first one, particularly, it is great that you have the reflection of the other side of his face in the window, it seems to complete the picture. You find yourself wondering what he is thinking about, very engaging. I also like the third a lot, the two Beckhams :-) looks like the kids are being taken somewhere they will have fun and they seem to have a bounce in their step. The other two are good too, though buildings never do anything for me, but that is not your fault. I think they all look good in B&W.
Fer
31st of May 2005 (Tue), 16:05
I really like the 1st one too ;)
wintoid
31st of May 2005 (Tue), 23:50
I like the 2 Beckhams a lot :D
Ben
1st of June 2005 (Wed), 03:19
I'm sure I am going to log on one day and see a photo of me that you have taken! I'll be keeping my eye out for you lurking near-by :D
Nice shots :)
monkey_wrench
1st of June 2005 (Wed), 04:14
I really like the first one. Since you asked for crit, I'm slightly distracted by the sticking out part of his collar and the logo on the window (far right). Perhaps a small crop? On the other hand it would be a shame to loose the bridge in the background.
I kinda like his reflection in the window, although I can't quite put my finger on why. Perhaps because showing part of his face makes me wonder what I'm missing in the rest?
The others don't do anything for me though I'm afraid. However, those sort of photos aren't really my style so you may wish to ignore me :)
i wasnt sure if i should of cropped the logo on the window so i just left it plus i didnt want to get rid of the bridge like you said and i agree on the reflection part :D
monkey_wrench
1st of June 2005 (Wed), 04:15
Just getting here now! Great photos, I love the first one, particularly, it is great that you have the reflection of the other side of his face in the window, it seems to complete the picture. You find yourself wondering what he is thinking about, very engaging. I also like the third a lot, the two Beckhams :-) looks like the kids are being taken somewhere they will have fun and they seem to have a bounce in their step. The other two are good too, though buildings never do anything for me, but that is not your fault. I think they all look good in B&W.
i may do some selective colouring maybe on the sky behind the church and the red of the manchester united tops on the two boys what do u think?
monkey_wrench
1st of June 2005 (Wed), 04:16
I really like the 1st one too ;)
Thanks Fer :D:D:D
monkey_wrench
1st of June 2005 (Wed), 04:17
I like the 2 Beckhams a lot :D
Thankyou i took two of that shot and wasnt sure which one to choose at all. but in the end the bent bollard on the right swung my decision that way :D
monkey_wrench
1st of June 2005 (Wed), 04:18
I'm sure I am going to log on one day and see a photo of me that you have taken! I'll be keeping my eye out for you lurking near-by :D
Nice shots :)
Ive been watching you!!! :lol:
kenyc
1st of June 2005 (Wed), 04:41
I vote for #1! :) all good though, love b&w.
KAC
mickle
1st of June 2005 (Wed), 04:47
My vote goes to #1 also.
smudge
1st of June 2005 (Wed), 07:45
The two Beckhams works well. It's a UK thing I think, we understand the funny side of Beckhams mass appeal, to the point where I once saw a kids kick about where all but about 5 players were David beckham.
T.O.
1st of June 2005 (Wed), 08:27
The first one I really like!!!
maybe I would try to get some more from the shadows so that we can see some more light on his face, but this is an excellent composition and the photo has "something to say"...
thanx for sharing,
T.O.
monkey_wrench
1st of June 2005 (Wed), 14:56
thankyou everyone for the kind words and critique :)
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