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AWGD8
15th of October 2009 (Thu), 19:07
Just plain and simple comment needed. Do you like it or not?

How do I get it better? Sorry, I couldn`t find the original file. This was saved as small Jpeg.

http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/1527/wingb.png (http://img26.imageshack.us/i/wingb.png/)

I added the straight version just for comparison.

http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/3329/aaara.jpg (http://img113.imageshack.us/i/aaara.jpg/)


Sorry still a small jpeg format...
Todd Lambert
15th of October 2009 (Thu), 19:13
Not sure if I like the tilted horizon much. The design elements are there, and I think you could get an interesting shot without having to resort to crazy angles.

Exposure looks good, but the photo quality isn't very good. It looks like too much compression.

Anyways, keep trying. Maybe try this one at a different time of the day, early evening would probably be best.
Chet
15th of October 2009 (Thu), 19:21
The Santiago Calatrava, I would also liked a straight horizon looking straight down the middle with the rest of the building. Good color and exposure.
AWGD8
15th of October 2009 (Thu), 19:26
Thanks for the feedback . Appreciated ;-)
OdiN1701
15th of October 2009 (Thu), 20:31
Simply Amazing. I think you should contact the Louvre about this one.
Todd Lambert
15th of October 2009 (Thu), 20:36
LOL, odin, you're such a prick.. I love it. 8-)
focus.pocus
15th of October 2009 (Thu), 20:36
it just doesn't do anything for me...
AWGD8
15th of October 2009 (Thu), 20:38
Simply Amazing. I think you should contact the Louvre about this one.

LOL!
OdiN1701
15th of October 2009 (Thu), 21:18
LOL, odin, you're such a prick.. I love it. 8-)

Well he doesn't seem to want the constructive criticism so what the heck.
Matt Leitholt
15th of October 2009 (Thu), 21:54
Pretty neat shot, I like the lines, maybe crop the boat out while still tilting?
Chet
15th of October 2009 (Thu), 22:11
What boat?
AWGD8
15th of October 2009 (Thu), 22:18
What boat?

I think he meant the base of the structure.
Chet
15th of October 2009 (Thu), 22:19
Like the Lido deck?
Matthew Kieren
15th of October 2009 (Thu), 23:18
I feel like I'm seasick, LOL. :) I do like this picture, especially all the straight lines, but I agree that the horizon being crooked doesn't look good.
Flo
15th of October 2009 (Thu), 23:26
Not....but al least you didn't glamour glow it;)
AWGD8
15th of October 2009 (Thu), 23:27
Pretty neat shot, I like the lines, maybe crop the boat out while still tilting?

Maybe like this?

http://img240.imageshack.us/img240/3558/wing4.jpg (http://img240.imageshack.us/i/wing4.jpg/)
tonydee
16th of October 2009 (Fri), 02:08
None of them are working for me... they draw the eye straight towards the structure you're cropping into. You need to find a more neutral cut-in point/line for the structure to cross out of frame in a less attention-grabbing way. Cheers, Tony