working on lighting

[johendley]

my ever-willing model helped last night with my newly converted basement/studio..
any c&c appreciated
http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn161/johendley/not%20dog%20stuff/magspracticeflashoct09_3.jpg
http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn161/johendley/not%20dog%20stuff/practicestudioflash1framed0ct09005.jpg

[trancerem]

main light should be more powerfull than others.
focus should be on her eyes.
check white ballance ( u have some extra red in photos )