View Full Version : Some Of My Recent Flower Photos, How Where I Improve?
Raizer
25th of October 2009 (Sun), 03:31
Any comments and/or advice would be much appreciated! :)
1
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2728/4041452769_3e579f9e7e_o.jpg
2
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2520/4040985815_c8d7b2ccdd_o.jpg
3
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2594/4041452135_c7aa891bf1_o.jpg
4
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2597/4041452567_423c14559d_o.jpg
5
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3493/4041452263_780cfc5c38_o.jpg
Thanks for looking
masayako
25th of October 2009 (Sun), 03:48
- I prefer more close up flower
- More contrast
- Avoid bright sunlight
- use a CPL
rw2
25th of October 2009 (Sun), 06:33
I like 3 and 4. 1 and 2 could be cropped tighter.
Flo
25th of October 2009 (Sun), 14:19
Your focus and details are super sharp.I like them.
frameworks
25th of October 2009 (Sun), 17:08
I really like #2. All look sharp though, I think you did a good job!
jetcode
25th of October 2009 (Sun), 20:41
I like #4 in terms of contrast, graphic design, and interest. I like #5 best but IMO the original crop is detracting slightly on the right side from the bee which is gloriously captured and presented. Here is a crop to consider and apologies for cropping out your logo I will delete this image if you ask me to.
IMO this is one of the nicest images I have seen in a long time. The color combination is engaging and the subject and framing is superb. It's a keeper and I would buy a print.
photoskeeter
25th of October 2009 (Sun), 21:08
I think you did a really good job. Nice color and framing. The bee shot is most excellent.
Raizer
26th of October 2009 (Mon), 00:21
Thanks for the kind words guys!!
Jetcode I do see what you mean about the crop (I hadn't cropped any of them), and I really like how you have cropped it! :)
focus.pocus
26th of October 2009 (Mon), 01:27
I am no expert but i play one on POTN and I like them...
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