Babies, hula hoops and a random sunset

[Living Daylight]

My GF and I have our own hula hoop business, and we decided to take a few shots to add to our web page, which I will be spicing up sometime soon.

While we were there I couldn't resist taking a few shots of her and our son on a cool saucer swing.

I know the shots may not be technically perfect, but I am always looking for tips to improve. First thing that comes to mind is improved wardrobe, but it was 3 degrees celsius.

The sunset was taken a while back, this is simply a new edit. This one I was aiming for a shot that I could hang up on the wall. Please critique this one especially brutally. I had ot shoot it at ISO800 because I do not have a tripod :(

Thanks!

1http://i613.photobucket.com/albums/tt212/livingdaylight/BellaVistaforNTV42of96.jpg

2http://i613.photobucket.com/albums/tt212/livingdaylight/BellaVistaforNTV52of96.jpg

3http://i613.photobucket.com/albums/tt212/livingdaylight/BellaVistaforNTV80of96.jpg

4http://i613.photobucket.com/albums/tt212/livingdaylight/IMG_2587.jpg

[Living Daylight]

20 views and no comments? Pretty please?

[corkneyfonz]

probably the best shot is no3. No1 and 2 dont work with the bridge, I'd crop that and No4 whilst a nice dusk shot does seem to be slightly soft on the foreground rocks, I suspect a hand held at a wide apperture.