Second Try at a Wedding

[ashue]

This is our second wedding however it is the first one we have shot in a church setting. Comments and Constructive critiques are appreciated!

1.
http://www.shuephotos.com/Weddings/Buntin-Uitts-Wedding/UITTS0150/692025816_5WWCs-L.jpg

2.
http://www.shuephotos.com/Weddings/Buntin-Uitts-Wedding/UITTS0168/692025836_H5w6u-L.jpg

3.
http://www.shuephotos.com/Weddings/Buntin-Uitts-Wedding/UITTS0179/692025869_FPh7b-L.jpg

4.
http://www.shuephotos.com/Weddings/Buntin-Uitts-Wedding/UITTS0439/692026175_bSbAJ-L.jpg

5.
http://www.shuephotos.com/Weddings/Buntin-Uitts-Wedding/UITTS0642/692026338_DjXvw-L.jpg

6.
http://www.shuephotos.com/Weddings/Buntin-Uitts-Wedding/UITTS0682-copy/692026383_Ps8cy-L.jpg

7.
http://www.shuephotos.com/Weddings/Buntin-Uitts-Wedding/UITTS0854-OS/692026766_YqdQm-L.jpg

8.
http://www.shuephotos.com/Weddings/Buntin-Uitts-Wedding/UITTS0878/692026838_WpcWP-L.jpg

[Svetlana]

I love the cake shot! I'd prefer that the flash is not that obvious in the rest of them and that the DOF is shallower, but I'm just being picky I guess..:) Also with #7 I'd maybe convert it to b/w instead of partial desaturation, it looks a bit ghostly otherwise.

[ashue]

Thank you....I am a fan of the cake shot too!!

I love the cake shot! I'd prefer that the flash is not that obvious in the rest of them and that the DOF is shallower, but I'm just being picky I guess..:) Also with #7 I'd maybe convert it to b/w instead of partial desaturation, it looks a bit ghostly otherwise.

[Wazza]

Nice detail shots.
I'm also not too fond of the cool tones in number 7. Would look great either warmed up, or full black and white, or even sepia. :)

[T.M.]

Really liked your set! You pay attention to details. #1 #2 #8 my favs.

The heart shaped light in #1 looks great!

[ashue]

Nice detail shots.
I'm also not too fond of the cool tones in number 7. Would look great either warmed up, or full black and white, or even sepia. :)

Thank you for the compliments!! I will try the picture in black and white also!!

Really liked your set! You pay attention to details. #1 #2 #8 my favs.

The heart shaped light in #1 looks great!


Thank you, I think I paid so much attention to detail because that is the one thing my wedding photographer did not do!!

I will pass on the compliments to my husband on the heart shaped light, he took this picture and I think it turned out great as well! :)

[HappySnapper90]

Why so many ring shots? There's 4 of them.
#2 the flower tops are over exposed. Either just blown out of close to it, but in either case brighter than they should be.
#3 too shallow DOF on the ring, IMHO.
#4 is a nice shapshot, but I doubt it would be selected for use in a wedding album.
#5 was this in the church? Even if it wasn't, there's too much DOF. Curtain rod is going through both of their heads.
#7 I don't get the processing here. It makes the photo rather dark.

[ashue]

Why so many ring shots? There's 4 of them.
#2 the flower tops are over exposed. Either just blown out of close to it, but in either case brighter than they should be.
#3 too shallow DOF on the ring, IMHO.
#4 is a nice shapshot, but I doubt it would be selected for use in a wedding album.
#5 was this in the church? Even if it wasn't, there's too much DOF. Curtain rod is going through both of their heads.
#7 I don't get the processing here. It makes the photo rather dark.

Thanks for pointing out how many rings shots there were....cause I had no idea how many I posted!! :rolleyes:
#4- It pretty much was just taken at the hip he was playing and I snapped the picture it was not meant to be posed.
#5- There was no other angle to not have that curtain rod through their heads. Maybe the DOF was too much however being this was only my second wedding I am still learning. So I will take this into consideration next time. :)

[AlexMoPhotography]

Great first photo. Not a fan of the desaturation in #7. She looks kinda sick.

[Pingar]

The heart shape in #1 is awesome. I loved the shot before i noticed the heart.

[sunnydacat]

really nice set, I like the detailed shots such as the ring in the book = heart and the last cake shot which is magnificent.

De-sat needs more contrast to work to my eye, but I like the idea.

[Fyerfytr]

#1 and #3 are amazing.....

[neeko]

1 is gorgeous.