View Full Version : First E-session - Danny and Sarah
Fyerfytr
28th of October 2009 (Wed), 15:52
#1
http://shielsphotography.smugmug.com/People/Danny-and-Sarah-Engagement/IMG5691/692930349_yTVED-L.jpg
#2
http://shielsphotography.smugmug.com/People/Danny-and-Sarah-Engagement/IMG5760/694481843_ghNvP-L.jpg
#3
http://shielsphotography.smugmug.com/People/Danny-and-Sarah-Engagement/IMG5750-copy-copy/692653628_qfJU6-L.jpg
#4
http://shielsphotography.smugmug.com/People/Danny-and-Sarah-Engagement/IMG5837/692655557_VNMQ2-L.jpg
Svetlana
28th of October 2009 (Wed), 16:20
oh i love these photos! #2 would be my fave! :) my only critique would be to smooth skin less as it looks plastic and in #4 to clone out the telephone line and lights as they're pretty visible with DOF not being too shallow.
Fyerfytr
28th of October 2009 (Wed), 16:23
Thanks! gotcha on the telephone line, I was debating that also. There was a car there also that I attempted to clone out.
Svetlana
28th of October 2009 (Wed), 16:37
wow you did a great job with the car! :)
Fyerfytr
28th of October 2009 (Wed), 22:16
Thanks Svetlana, much appreciated....
qtranva
29th of October 2009 (Thu), 21:51
I like the colors in these photos - very nice and warm. #3 is cute. #4 besides the utility line, the background is a little too sharp - nice pose from the models though. Oh, I agree with Svetlana that the skin is too smooth. My early engagement portraits also tend to have unrealistic overly smooth skin. Now I've learned to back off and let people look more real.
Apollo.11
29th of October 2009 (Thu), 21:55
great set. i can't believe it's your first session.
Fyerfytr
31st of October 2009 (Sat), 13:50
Thanks all, yes I think the more I look at the one especially I will go back and re-do the skin softening.
SS308
31st of October 2009 (Sat), 15:31
Nice series, lighting is spot on! My favorite is #3. Could be labeled "Anticipation".
Thanks for sharing!
Fyerfytr
1st of November 2009 (Sun), 07:51
Nice series, lighting is spot on! My favorite is #3. Could be labeled "Anticipation".
Thanks for sharing!
Thanks on Number 3 - Credit goes to
hjghj for inspiration on that composition.
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