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RookieCanon1986
9th of November 2009 (Mon), 16:02
1.
http://i34.tinypic.com/1zvtt14.jpg

2.
http://i37.tinypic.com/2hmojs9.jpg

3.
http://i36.tinypic.com/af9dfm.jpg

4.
http://i33.tinypic.com/2hx4whx.jpg

RookieCanon1986
10th of November 2009 (Tue), 12:42
Can anyone give cc???

Tim Park
10th of November 2009 (Tue), 17:02
Hi there! I just commented on your other posts, so I thought I'd so the same here...

1. Composition........#3 would have benefited from a horizontal orientation. I noticed that every photo you've posted here and elsewhere are in the vertical orientation. Try mixing it up. And be aware of what you put in the frame of the shot.

2. Eating..........very few "eating" shots are appealing. #4 looks like you just snapped away while this boy was minding his own business. You caught him right when he covered his mouth.

3. B&W...........As I mentioned before, b&w is not easy. In fact, not every photo looks good in b&w. Have a vision before just clicking the button.

I really do hope my comments help. It seems like you're eager to shoot and learn, which is awesome! I look forward to seeing improved photos!

RookieCanon1986
10th of November 2009 (Tue), 17:22
Tim- You're right about all my picture are most vertical. I didn't noticed it until you told me.. Thanks for telling me... Of course, I will keeping shooting the pictures to improve my skills. Tomorrow, I will go to the park with my mother after work... I hope that I catch some good picture and post it... :)