Better compositon than last post?

[HMDH3]

Hi! just filing through more pics as I get ready to make the big move to an external hard drive....:confused:
do you feel this is a more balanced picture? notice no cut off hooves, and horses on each side....taking some of the feed back from my last post. This is my daughter and her Papa, ironic that they're both leading grey horses.
anyway, please critic, I'm learning so much from you all, I can't thank you enough!!!:)

http://i257.photobucket.com/albums/hh223/tara4574/hailey2009/Picture075-1.jpg

[Todd Lambert]

Much better, but now you've got a red square coming out of his head.

Isn't this fun? hehehe

Exposure looks good, the colors are nice and the focus is sharp, just that damn red box. Otherwise, works for me.

[lawlz_xD]

I think I'd like the picture much better if you could actually see the faces of the people and horses, but that is just me.

[HMDH3]

damn rusty sign. soo close!!! well, at least I'm learning something and well that's all that matters at this point. at least I can go do that whenever I have a free weekend. my parents are kind enough to play along. LOL. got to love em!

[F4 Cyborg]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2695/4102204266_cf53f09788_o.jpg

Hope ya dun mind. I took (to me) the interesting part and nudged the perspective a bit and flipped it around to make it look like the Lil One is leading to, instead of the mean ole horsey trying to nudge her off the path. Just an Idea.
Sometimes the way it is taken is offset by the way we see it in our head, Oops ( random access memory )

[HMDH3]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2695/4102204266_cf53f09788_o.jpg

Sometimes the way it is taken is offset by the way we see it in our head, Oops ( random access memory )

I know what you mean, SOOOO what do you mean!

I didn't even know that you can do that, after I get a little better with comp. and thinking my shots through, and, and, and, and.......I'll make learning PP my next obsession! Thank you.

[Flo]

Better for sure HM!

[joedlh]

I usually don't like walking-away pictures because the face and eyes are so important. But I think this one tells a story in contrasting the size of the girl with the man and horses. Too bad about the red sign, however. You might try getting them walking into a field for a better background -- the building isn't so great either.

[HMDH3]

Thank you all for your responses! it's nice to hear that I'm heading in the right direction!!!
I just discovered RAW and it's SOOO much fun. :) :) :)