critique please

[Domgravine]

tell me everything lol

http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e42/domgravine/jp.jpg

[jetcode]

I like it. I think it's a nice composition and the tone in the print is excellent. The lighting works. The only slight conflict I have is with the bar on the left side. To my eye it is distracting. You could burn down the highlight portion or the pole which would reduce it's visual impact. Cropping out that white dot and that space on that side of the pole might help too. Certainly not a show stopper.

[ScottKCooper]

maybe the open shirt on his right was a little forced, but great shot.

[Robert_Lay]

I'm sorry but the pose is too artificial.

Also, the color balance is giving very gray flesh tones, which should be much warmer.

I would suggest doing something different with the shirt and give the subject something to do with his hands to make it look more natural.

Otherwise, very good!