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JArckivy
20th of November 2009 (Fri), 16:18
Thanks

JArckivy
20th of November 2009 (Fri), 16:54
Ok, I figured out how to do this. Please don't get mad because of my mess ups...Lol

Ryan7490
20th of November 2009 (Fri), 16:55
These just look awful, I will try again...
lol I was gonna say that comment was a bit harsh, then I realized it was the op.

JArckivy
20th of November 2009 (Fri), 17:02
This was very hard for me to figure out Ryan....LOL

Flo
20th of November 2009 (Fri), 17:05
This one feels a little OOF for me on her face? There is a ton of headroom in this.and that lower branch just seems out of place...Perhaps a tighter crop?

JArckivy
20th of November 2009 (Fri), 17:06
Ooh, I see what you mean..Thanks. I will do that

jd loon
20th of November 2009 (Fri), 17:11
Wow , you did a great job of removing the brick wall.... Please tell us how you made that tree grow so much !
Love the comp in both, but especially the 2nd. Sky a little blown out between the leaves.
On the first on , I don't think the Dutch angle was necessary. Other wise a good comp. The shadows on the ground is interesting.

JArckivy
20th of November 2009 (Fri), 17:19
Alright jd loon, those first two were complete mess ups..lol Thanks though, still new to all this and have TONS to learn. Just wasn't sure I was editing the right way...

Flo
20th of November 2009 (Fri), 17:40
Alright jd loon, those first two were complete mess ups..lol Thanks though, still new to all this and have TONS to learn. Just wasn't sure I was editing the right way...

Delete the first ones....then the actual photo you posted will stand alone.;)

JArckivy
20th of November 2009 (Fri), 20:53
Thanks Flo, couldn't figure out how to delete....Got it

stsva
20th of November 2009 (Fri), 21:44
Slight change in white/color balance and curves adjustment + crop. This may or may not be any place close to what you wanted to present. The crop was mainly to get rid of the overexposed sky showing through the leaves to the left of the tree, although I think this also highlights the couple a little more than the original crop.

JArckivy
20th of November 2009 (Fri), 22:03
I love it...Thanks so much..