One more for feedback...

[Elbee19]

Please critique...thank you!

[corkneyfonz]

I like the shadows, the patina on the barrier but I'm dropping out of the gap on the r/h side. As such I can't fully enjoy the photographic experience.

[Elbee19]

Corkneyfonz...any suggestions for me to help this shot keep your interest? Thanks for the feedback!

[corkneyfonz]

The problem begins with upright no1, it's almost at 90 degrees until all the other uprights teeter in a domino effect out of the frame. I've tried lens distortion on it but to no avail. It might be that a simple burning of the r/h corner may fool the eye. As an aside camera club judges usually hate diagonals with a vengance, perhaps this is why.