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justin240
29th of November 2009 (Sun), 17:25
Does this work? Tell me what you think. Thanks!




http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a122/justin240/theSource.jpg
justin240
29th of November 2009 (Sun), 20:43
some different lighting, and more dof

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a122/justin240/theSource1.jpg
HostileM6
29th of November 2009 (Sun), 20:53
I favor the second one a lot more. First one doesn't have too much interest and it's centered.

Second one has nice lighting and the DOF works with the shot.
Well done.
justin240
29th of November 2009 (Sun), 21:14
thanks, I know it's a pretty boring subject. Some of you people on this forum somehow find really nice compositions on really plain subjects. I guess I am practicing on simple fundamentals such as this. Any more tips appreciated!
AmandaMarie
29th of November 2009 (Sun), 21:15
You could try the first one with a greater focus range. I think it'd be really cool that way.

And the second one is great!
jetcode
29th of November 2009 (Sun), 21:29
looks like dimarzio super distortion ... 1st is best IMO ... great angle and focus and designed for a player!
justin240
29th of November 2009 (Sun), 23:26
You could try the first one with a greater focus range. I think it'd be really cool that way.

And the second one is great!
Hey thanks Amanda, I think I will give it a try. I see your from my hometown Calgary, crazy grey cup game today over there!
looks like dimarzio super distortion ... 1st is best IMO ... great angle and focus and designed for a player!
thanks jetcode, unfortunately I don't pick it up as much as I should