Lil' Angel

[Lotto]

Didn't notice it when I was taking the picture, do you see the little "wings" over her shoulders? C&C welcome.

http://home.pacbell.net/coolbit/LilAngel.jpg

[marie]

that's amazing how her hair sits like that http://www.photography-on-the.net/forum/images/smilies/icon_biggrin.gif
it's lovely
beautiful girl and shot

is that her name on the dress ?
http://www.photography-on-the.net/forum/images/smilies/icon_cool.gif

[ayotnoms]

An excellent composition.
Well done! :-)

[karusel]

Wonderful! I'm just not sure about 'cutting' the legs like that...

The girl looks a bit like an anime character, almost surreal.

[shortie]

cute girl

lovely shot and the frame is cool as well

Shortie

[djonto]

Lovely shot, but I agree about cutting the legs out, they need to be in the shot IMO

[DSMITH131]

thats why we call them little angels

Didn't notice it when I was taking the picture, do you see the little "wings" over her shoulders? C&C welcome.

[schmoelzel]

Nice!! Don't mind the legs missing at all!!

[MCB]

A very sweet picture. Good work.

[Maureen Souza]

Gorgeous..... and love the 'wings'.

[Lotto]

Thank you all. I was wondering about the legs got cutting off too, unfortunately she wasn't wearing the right shoes that day.

Interesting note: I was using Mike's framing script, trying to align up the shadows, I flipped the image. Now the image on the right, her hair and posture are less "natural and pleasing" to me. Do you feel the same and why?

http://home.pacbell.net/coolbit/LilAngelCP.jpg

[karusel]

Agreed. As of why... it could be, that I find the left one more pleasing because I've already seen it and liked it, now the other one is just odd. Like watching yourself in the mirror is natural to you, but when you see a picture of yourself you think you look odd, differend that the 'real' you.

Or it could be, that the natural direction of eye travelling in the composition of the first photo is from left to right. The girl has her hair put to the right side (her left) and her head tilted also to the right. In addition to that, the plants in the background 'start' in the lower right region of the frame and go upwards in a curve, so it seems. And on the wall the left side is bright and it darkens to the right. All of this suggests left-to-right eye travel.

Also, this girl is obviously going to be a heartbreaker in a good decade... :D

[Reflection]

I think it could be from the way we view things - from left to right, as you would read it. In the regular image, you look from left to right and see her face first, then the hair, so you stop. The second picture has the hair 'blocking' the face in a way. Maybe I'm looking too deep into it!

She's a lovely girl, that's for sure! I reckon the crop should have been on her shins, so the whole knee (and dress) would still be in the shot. Crops on the knee aren't as aesthetically pleasing for me, I don't know why.

The photo is soft to reflect her childish innocence, and the lighting is well used. Kudos!

[marie]

Agreed. As of why... it could be, that I find the left one more pleasing because I've already seen it and liked it, now the other one is just odd. Like watching yourself in the mirror is natural to you, but when you see a picture of yourself you think you look odd, differend that the 'real' you.



I agree
on the left is best

:)

[Lotto]

Ah, the left to right explaination make perfect sense to me. Thx for sharing.

As for the crop, I alway want to know the right way to crop for 3/4 shots, will keep the shins in mind on the next time. Thank you.