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Mike Panic
14th of June 2005 (Tue), 11:03
http://www.mikepanic.com/photos/albums/jamie_yoga_june_11_2005/aad.jpg
R1 Kid
14th of June 2005 (Tue), 11:07
I love the shot. Great contour lines on the back.
hollow
14th of June 2005 (Tue), 13:30
Mike

The bricks line seems to me a little un-straight.
I've took the permission to change (straighten) a little this photo. Hope you don't mind.
Anyway maybe I am wrong.
See it an tell me what you think.

Regards
mgbeach
14th of June 2005 (Tue), 14:06
you may try to define the lines between her thighs and her back a bit more. As it is, at first glance she looks a lot broader than she actually is.
Mike Panic
14th of June 2005 (Tue), 14:55
yea i know it needed to be rotated ccw 1 or 2 degrees :)
dkord
15th of June 2005 (Wed), 22:20
you may try to define the lines between her thighs and her back a bit more. As it is, at first glance she looks a lot broader than she actually is.

I agree, I also would like to see the light on the wall without the heavy shadow.
sixshot
15th of June 2005 (Wed), 22:35
Not keen on the shadow on the wall.....however the overall composition works really well.
PhotosGuy
18th of June 2005 (Sat), 06:12
I've took the permission to change (straighten) a little this photo. Hope you don't mind. :D:D Now the pipe is at an angle

I like this one. A lot more that the other one you posted. ;) Reminds me of those "Arty" galleries. Maybe she could be looking at a copy of the 1st pic?