My 1st TTD: Comments Welcome

[spotted_assassin]

http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/111/l_84a3ca2673b641b29da5dac31a7aca10.jpg

This was the one I chose out of about 3 others.

[ootsk]

VERY cute girl. Good pose. Good crop. Bad choice of underclothes. And she seems a bit out of focus.

[sctbiggs]

focus is off... or some really bad web compression. I get the concept... the jeans under the dress. I just don't know if I like it. woulda been better wearing no pants and adjusting the dress slightly to cover the goods.

[HQP]

I like it. I just wish her eyes/face were in focus

[auroraskye]

I applaude you for your first effort. I get the idea you were going for but there are a few things that bother me.

I agree her face looks out of focus but I think it is compression and not focus, it looks like a pretty small aperture was used here, the ivy and fence look in focus, as do the steps in front of her so my guess is it's just compressed in an odd fashion.

I don't like the jeans. I think if she wanted an edgy look, go for leggings.. but the rest of the look has to match. Otherwise it's like.. what's going on here?

I don't like where her arms are cropped. She looks a bit like an amputee, sorry.

Good feeling in the shot, mostly nice composition exccept for the arm thing. Keep on shooting!

[spotted_assassin]

Thanks you all, for the comments...I'm trying to get into wedding photography. It's way more difficult than I expected. LOL
Gonna stick with it though!
Thanks again