3rd Wedding

[BJWOK]

Hi folks,

Weddings are not the core of my business, however I do like the challenge they present and cannot say no to a gig. Here's the 3rd wedding I've shot, your thoughts appreciated!

01. http://www.bjwok.com/photos/weddings/hannahluka/hannahluka01.jpg

02. http://www.bjwok.com/photos/weddings/hannahluka/hannahluka02.jpg

03. http://www.bjwok.com/photos/weddings/hannahluka/hannahluka03.jpg

04. http://www.bjwok.com/photos/weddings/hannahluka/hannahluka04.jpg

05. http://www.bjwok.com/photos/weddings/hannahluka/hannahluka05.jpg

06. http://www.bjwok.com/photos/weddings/hannahluka/hannahluka06.jpg

07. http://www.bjwok.com/photos/weddings/hannahluka/hannahluka07.jpg

08. http://www.bjwok.com/photos/weddings/hannahluka/hannahluka08.jpg

[BJWOK]

09. http://www.bjwok.com/photos/weddings/hannahluka/hannahluka09.jpg

[SuzyView]

I'm not seeing any images. Are you sure the links are good? And only 8 images are allowed per thread. Please pick the best 8 and that's all.

[sctbiggs]

i don't typically comment on each picture in this fashion but i'm bored so here goes.

1- nice picture, nothing really special.
2- sun killed it
3- really like the processing on this one
4- nice! not used to seeing both feet off the ground in this "standard" picture. I will be tossing this in now from time to time. Thank You.
5- A little dark in the face. Lighten up that area just a tad? Something else about this picture just seems lacking to me... can't figure it out though.
6- from time to time I see this. In formals, in my opinion, the bride and groom are most important. I don't like seeing a family or wedding party member being the main subject of the picture as is the case here. The girl, her short skirt and long legs is the first thing a viewer sees.
7- Shot composed great. Really like the angle, background and processing of the shot. Glaring issue I see is the guy in the back on the right. Really? Was something that funny? There are a few people laughing, some smiling and the guy in the middle looking constipated. Maybe you can clone his head out of another and input it into this one.
8- It's nice. A little hot in some areas. Maybe you can burn some of the oily/sweaty highlighted skin out.
9- No comment... as there aren't supposed to be more than 8 posted. :)

[SuzyView]

I linked #9. Please don't put more than 8 embedded or I'll have to edit.

[FamilyJules]

looks like a fun group! I LOVE those kinds!
#2... Scott is right.... the sun is killing it for me, here
#3 is rockin ;)
#5 is nice, but as stated, their faces are a tad dark, and she looks a bit awkward... she needs to relax her shoulders and arms a little more.
#7 is a very nice group shot (I've used that pose a few times ;) ... Hard to find bridesmaids who don't mind sitting on the ground) backdrop is fantastic.
#9 is a wonderful shot