Strobist try #3

[Macrosill]

So this was shot the same day as my 1st attempt at off camera flash. I think this one turned out pretty good. A single off camera flash camera right and ambient light through a white bed sheet.

C&C welcome of course.

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4046/4197537605_99a73ccdcc.jpg

[zelseman]

Its not bad. You have a little bit more work on the background in the corners(wrinkles, underexposed,..)
Good shot though.