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velvetwoodstock
1st of January 2010 (Fri), 16:55
Eventually planning on placing myself in the photo, either crawling through an opening or something along those lines. Any critique would be wonderful.


Also The shadow, I realize, is quite a bit off.
Oh and this is my first post here, so hello everyone!

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2638/4225443417_56dc3543d5.jpg

Joelene
1st of January 2010 (Fri), 20:45
hi Velvet!

this is a cool piece. I can't wait to see the final draft, I really want to know where you are going with this. Then the

ascholer
2nd of January 2010 (Sat), 00:09
I think you should have the two openings show two slightly incompatible poses. Nothing obviously wrong, just enough to give that "something's not quite right" feeling at an almost subconscious level.