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anhtimmy
5th of January 2010 (Tue), 00:00
some of my favorite shots during my first month of photography.
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http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4060/4247268178_03d93f7551_b.jpg
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http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2638/4247268198_5a30108098_b.jpg
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http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2766/4247268188_ab7a6985aa_b.jpg
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http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4067/4247268168_e88016305d_b.jpg
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http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4063/4247268152_3dfceca1a9_b.jpg
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http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4030/4247268124_e453324c94_b.jpg
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http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2702/4243306081_4be1148fa0_b.jpg
vk2gwk
5th of January 2010 (Tue), 00:35
Over all: promising! I think you have a good eye for the right composition.
Some remarks:
#1: nice shot - bit more contrast?
#2: here and there a bit blown out - could do with some selective exposure correction.
#3: a tad more DOF (up to the thrid from the left) but that is very personal.
#4: needs a bit straightening. Just a little bit leaning to the right.
#5: a beauty !
#6: not quite clear: drop of rain off a leaf??? Not enough information in the picture and as an abstract too empty.
#7: very good shot that would have been better if it was slightly darker. Scary to realise that we may end up like this....
anhtimmy
5th of January 2010 (Tue), 00:42
i've been stuck at home, so I didn't have much of an environment to take pictures.
thanks for the critiques. they helped alot
kaiden
7th of January 2010 (Thu), 01:25
Uncalled for comment, your thread did not deserver such harsh words and for that, I am extremely sorry... I can not go back and fix my childish behavior; however I do feel my conscience would not be ok without extending an apology. Once again, I hope you can accept my request for forgiveness and forgive the post as it was placed in an unfavorable format.
Grimage
7th of January 2010 (Thu), 16:48
1, is interesting... nice that the edges are so smooth and soft.. also the tone is very nice.
2, Even though its a bit dramatic coloring, it has a certain mood that provokes thoughts.. what happened to the baby etc...
3, I agree here that the DOF is a bit off.. but definitely a promising picture... with nice composition.
4, nice but not to interesting.
5, same as 4
6, maybe empty but definitely interesting shot!
7, tells a story, nice tone and focus.
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