Wonderland style

[MissEmma]

Another style i would like to expand on. Based on and inspired by Alice in wonderland and fashion styles in teen vogue etc. Please comment and if you have any ideas of other ways i could i could portray the charector alice or any others, they would be much appreciated! thanks:)

[Flo]

One is dark and could use a tight crop. Watch those eyes and their perspective, she has lots of whites now..she is looking too far to her side.

Second is OOF.or blurred purposely?

[gonzogolf]

The first shot is nice, but I would like to see her looking more toward the camera as Gail said. As for your "based on and inspired by Alice in Wonderland". There really isnt anything in here to signal to the viewer thats what you were going for. Alice in wonderland has a lot of existing imagery from the various print and movie versions. One option would be to tap into that, or alternatively at least craft a scene from the book with enough hints/cues that you have a bigger theme in mind than a nice portrait by a tree.

[Paul J McCain]

First picture also looks to be a bit crooked? Either way, you might have been going for the subject in the middle, but you're really cutting a lot of the image away with the tree and then there's otherwise empty space to the left... making a snapshot-looking image. I'd give you my thoughts on a crop but editing is off.

Second image is much better, but too sharp of an angle of her face/look, IMO.

Paul

[MissEmma]

some more

[Flo]

First of the last post is cute, but that Dutch angle on the second is FAR too much!

[photobaby]

I really like the first image of the last two you posted.

[MissEmma]

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