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Jack McEntire
7th of January 2010 (Thu), 11:18
http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/007/8/3/Golden_by_JackMcEntire.png

I'd really like to hear people's thoughts on the composition, the lighting, and the PP.

Thanks in advance for any C&C! :)

jimmeh
7th of January 2010 (Thu), 11:20
i don't like the combination, i would just have it as one eye. Really nicely taken though. I prefer the bottom one...

Jack McEntire
7th of January 2010 (Thu), 11:28
Thank you. :) The reason I decided to make them one image was because they're my parents' eyes, and they wanted to compare them! :p I can see exactly where you're coming from, I guess they're really all about the individual.

Flo
7th of January 2010 (Thu), 11:29
MAcro eyes creep me out, lol, but super great clarity and focus!

Jack McEntire
7th of January 2010 (Thu), 12:00
Lol, thanks! :lol: I just got my Sigma 150mm last week and I'm very pleased with it!

This is the before and after, I forgot to post it before:

http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/007/a/c/Golden___Before_and_After_by_JackMcEntire.gif

Flo
7th of January 2010 (Thu), 12:21
ACH:shock::shock:

jimmeh
7th of January 2010 (Thu), 12:39
Thank you. :) The reason I decided to make them one image was because they're my parents' eyes, and they wanted to compare them! :p I can see exactly where you're coming from, I guess they're really all about the individual.

those are from 2 different people? seriously?

Jack McEntire
7th of January 2010 (Thu), 13:36
They are indeed. :) You'd be surprised how similar eyes look at 1:1!

pickupman92
8th of January 2010 (Fri), 00:02
I think less vignetting would help, or at least feather it back towards the edges more. incredible sharpness...

Jason B.
8th of January 2010 (Fri), 00:18
I have wanted to do this for awhile. Looks great.

JimMcrae
8th of January 2010 (Fri), 06:15
Cracking detail!

Grimage
8th of January 2010 (Fri), 06:50
Scary:P

vpnd
8th of January 2010 (Fri), 10:53
blech, too much skin detail. sharp tho

mattman193
8th of January 2010 (Fri), 14:50
good old ros and brian

good picture jackMcEntire x:)

Jack McEntire
13th of January 2010 (Wed), 15:17
Thank you! :)

As I've mentioned in a couple of other threads, the sharpness of the Sigma 150mm is great, I'm really pleased with it! AF may hunt a little in low light but it's dead silent nonetheless. :p