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mdenigris
22nd of June 2005 (Wed), 21:50
My lovely wife...outside our home in NY.

Jetmech1
22nd of June 2005 (Wed), 22:07
Very nice capture.

grego
22nd of June 2005 (Wed), 23:54
I think you cut off too much with her right arm and her legs/feet kind of popping up from her right leg. It's a little distracting. I'd crop tighter atleast for this photo. However, if you were to re-shoot, frame more of her body in the viewfinder.

Andy_T
23rd of June 2005 (Thu), 04:20
Beautiful image, and nice colours and lighting.

But I agree with the comment on the crop.

Best regards,
Andy

mdenigris
23rd of June 2005 (Thu), 04:57
Thanks for the advice. Is this better??

2goldens
23rd of June 2005 (Thu), 05:32
I agree, great light and color but you need to pull back on the crop. If I took the shot I would frame it so all could see it when they came into my house.
As many people have said in this forum, if you like the shot that is all that counts.

D Boone
23rd of June 2005 (Thu), 07:13
Hey, I like it. I don't mind the missing limbs. Might not be the right way, but it works for me. My eye goes right to her face. I see the ring the watch... But the rest doesn't bother me. If anything the background is a bit distracting to me.

martook
23rd of June 2005 (Thu), 14:52
I agree with the others, it's a nice shot, the pose is good, but you should work on the framing and cropping. And buy the 50mm 1.8, so you can get rid of the background and get even more sharpness! ;)
But I do like the picture, and your wife is very beautiful!

jimsolt
23rd of June 2005 (Thu), 15:02
For those who ask about triangles in good composition . . check this picture out. Very nice.

Jim