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dandan
23rd of June 2005 (Thu), 22:58
This was taken in japan.. the bushes are ocha fields (green tea)
please crit.. be harsh,.. i can take it
http://www.deviantart.com/view/19812812/
sory for the link. DA wont let me hotlink
Meerkat17
24th of June 2005 (Fri), 06:01
Hello Dandan,
I don't think there's very much to critique - well not in my book.
Its' a strong image, the zigzag leads the eye through the image to the two buildings and beyond. It has a nice compositional feel to it which holds the viewers attention - the gold colour just adds a little bit extra to the overall green to keep interest and the buildings compliment that too.
Well done - its a nice image.
Regards
David
bikerider
24th of June 2005 (Fri), 06:23
That's a beautiful image, love the way the lines work and the tin sheds on an angle look consistent with the overall image, very cool.
Roger.
dandan
25th of June 2005 (Sat), 04:07
thanks guys. very appreciated
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