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tylerpaulphoto
19th of January 2010 (Tue), 16:24
1. http://i834.photobucket.com/albums/zz261/tylerpaulphoto/bridge1copy.jpg
2.
http://i834.photobucket.com/albums/zz261/tylerpaulphoto/archdetail1copy.jpg
3.
http://i834.photobucket.com/albums/zz261/tylerpaulphoto/HH_arch4copy.jpg
4.
http://i834.photobucket.com/albums/zz261/tylerpaulphoto/FLC2copy.jpg
5.
http://i834.photobucket.com/albums/zz261/tylerpaulphoto/FLC1copy.jpg
pickupman92
19th of January 2010 (Tue), 16:27
Looks like something I'd see in a brochure for somewhere. I think you did an excellent job.
PixelPusher
19th of January 2010 (Tue), 16:49
Nice shots, did you use your TS lens on any of these? I have the TS 45, have lots of experimenting with it.
tylerpaulphoto
19th of January 2010 (Tue), 17:44
No I actually used my 24-70 for all of them, i might have used a 16-35 for the interiors. I used some of the keystone correction software in CS4 but a very minimal amount.
corkneyfonz
19th of January 2010 (Tue), 19:36
The first two are probably the strongest images, although all taken very competently.
PhotogJeff
19th of January 2010 (Tue), 20:47
Real good consistent work. Nice job. Jeff
PhilF
19th of January 2010 (Tue), 21:48
I like 2 , 4 , 5 very architectural digest.

what lens where you using?
tylerpaulphoto
19th of January 2010 (Tue), 22:04
Im using a Canon 24-70mm F/2.8 L for all of these shots... i tried to square the film plane up with the subject plane as much as possible to prevent keystoning and corrected the rest with minimal PS work
Dmao
20th of January 2010 (Wed), 00:03
I really like #2 and #4
tylerpaulphoto
20th of January 2010 (Wed), 00:42
Ok i would like more feed back than what images you like. If you could share what about them you like, or how i could improve would be nice.
williejr
20th of January 2010 (Wed), 02:31
I like them all, the last two look like the vertical lines could use some straightening.
NeoDSLR
20th of January 2010 (Wed), 05:27
All excellent photos... great colours and sharpness. I especially like the 2nd one.
Annie Social
20th of January 2010 (Wed), 10:52
The interior of the building in shots 4 and 5 comes off as a pretty nasty green, especially #5 (at least on my monitor). It looks like it wouldn't be difficult to select the green areas and take the edge off. Otherwise nice shots...
tylerpaulphoto
20th of January 2010 (Wed), 11:15
I think that might be your monitor. The interior shot was shot with a whibal card in the frame.
OdiN1701
20th of January 2010 (Wed), 13:52
Where's the arch? I see lots of things, but not really an arch.