My attempt with a model and a...desert? in Florida?

[aznsoccerstar11]

just two so far.

1.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2523/4284687071_0678a81d63_o.jpg

2.

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2761/4284975515_eda30dc3d3_o.jpg

3

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4062/4292740928_ce4e76bd48_o.jpg

4

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4011/4292740802_b2ff77dcb2_o.jpg

5

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4041/4291998809_14c236a8d8_o.jpg

6

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4030/4296554060_626bd3430c_o.jpg

7

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4001/4296553646_a72821de98_o.jpg

8

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2739/4291998727_2859646b7d_o.jpg

[Meanderthal]

#2 is quite charming, and the colors work well together. Might have moved the camera a bit to the right, to get more sun on the model's face, and getting the model from the center of the frame while keeping the sun where it is. In #1 the model has an interesting setting but she won't like the look of her legs or the barrel-like appearance of the outfit. Hmm, turning her somewhat in the direction of the man would have made the scene friendlier. Then legs closer together, and lift the knee a bit. What did you wish to convey, as the artist?

[aznsoccerstar11]

I actually have quite a few more to edit I just started with these,
but
number 2 there really wasnt sun as it is a lens flare and strobes.

as far as number one just going for something different the male in the back reaching and hungry while the model is posing as if nothing is going on.

[MikePrattPhotography]

WOW.. great shots..LOVE number 2

[ChadAndreo]

where were these taking?

[chomish]

Wow great shots!!! Lighting is great. She definately pops from image. Kinda looks like its a fake background. Good job.

[aznsoccerstar11]

WOW.. great shots..LOVE number 2

thanks!

Wow great shots!!! Lighting is great. She definately pops from image. Kinda looks like its a fake background. Good job.

thanks!

where were these taking?


Florida desert ;) In Orlando

[tony rage]

Is there a desert here in Orlando????? where is it!? geez! been here for 9 years and have never seen one! good photos btw

[5Dmaniac]

Where is her shadow in #1? The grasses in the sand throw a shadow, but she does not. It almost looks like you pasted her into the scene and therefor it looks fake to me.

[lukeap69]

very nice mate. i like the colours in #1.

[sobieski]

Sure it is..Fake. No shadows (only a small piece of it) in the second one as well..

[hpulley]

No desert in Florida, yet ;-)

I like #2, more natural, lovely. The first one is trying to be a hot shot but the pose seems unnatural so it doesn't seem as sexy to me.

[photoguy6405]

as far as number one just going for something different the male in the back reaching and hungry while the model is posing as if nothing is going on.
I like #1 better, precisely for this reason. It's different and made me smile in appreciation.

[sulla]

#2 is very nice.
#1 is just odd, looks like a composite. No tracks in the sand , no shadows, and heels in the "desert".... just doesn't work for me.

[DN003]

Great shots!

[Flo]

#2 is stunning.

[ED Altares]

I think #1 is way better off without the girl in foreground... far more moving a photo. It's obviously a composite image.

# 2 is good.... composite or not... its a great shot.

[Calindy]

Great shots! Looks like my backyard;)

[aznsoccerstar11]

added some more, none are composite. i just edited...

[getbent]

I really like #2 and #6. I think both really highlight what an attractive lady she is. Simple, elegant, beautiful.

[joedlh]

Just from a story-telling perspective, I like the ones with both models in them. Your posing is imaginative. The guy has character. White balance looks off in #4.

[cheehoo]

i like the series! #1 looks a bit off w/o her shadow.
#2 i love everything except that it looks like she walked backwards and it keeps bothering me that her tracks are in front of her and not behind...
#8 looks straight out of an ad in a magazine!

[aznsoccerstar11]

thanks everyone!

well here is number 1 unedited on the ground, really no shadow from her cause i used 2 strobes.

but the messy sand bothered me tons.

before
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2694/4284687425_1e497cd9ab_o.jpg

after
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4068/4284687239_65e6986cd3_o.jpg

[captjohnny]

I think they are really really good, especially for a first attempt. Love #1 without the girl as well

[corkneyfonz]

Missed these first time round. Excellent captures.