The Other half

[Desertraptor]

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4070/4293806011_9b968e491a_o.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2711/4292053853_1dcafe1a9f_o.jpg

Better?

[Omaru]

Number is ok 1 and 3 seem to be underexposed a bit for my tastes.

[Ichiban]

pp in some fill light on 1 and 3 and they should be golden.

[Michael Bottoms]

Petty lady... 1 and 3 definitely need some fill though... Thanks for sharing.

[GoRk]

2 is correctly exposed...1 and 3 are FAIL

[anthonyi]

Very appealing subject, I hope you take lots more.

[drunkenxmonkee]

1 & 3 needs some work. Be careful when you shoot outdoors to not get flares like #1.It draws too much attention to the model's right bicep.