Winter motion

[Raz\/an]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2734/4294417047_fe577d5b3d_b.jpg

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4068/4295160714_23bbbb3f3d_b.jpg

Critique please :oops:.

[Raz\/an]

so bad? no comments? :(

[vk2gwk]

In #1 the action is not clear: not enough snow on the ground visible to "tell" that it is an exploding snow ball .
#2 is more obvious in that respect. Nice winter picture.

[joedlh]

Well, snowball fights are so passe.

The first one would be a good "Guess what this is" shot, because that's what I was doing. There's little that is compelling about it. The second is out of focus. I'm sure you were having a good time, even if perhaps the recipients of your frozen highjinks weren't. But these are basically snapshots. Next time, you might try having somebody else throw the snowballs while you pick a better point of view, compose and shoot.

[backup63]

The first one makes me laugh, because it looks like she is giving someone the finger and then getting a snowball in the face for it. I don't know if that was the intention, but I think it's funny.

[kaiden]

Uncalled for comment, your thread did not deserver such harsh words and for that, I am extremely sorry... I can not go back and fix my childish behavior; however I do feel my conscience would not be ok without extending an apology. Once again, I hope you can accept my request for forgiveness and forgive the post as it was placed in an unfavorable format.