E-Shoot

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Your comments and criticisms are greatly appreciated.

Thanks.

1.)

http://i713.photobucket.com/albums/ww138/FocusPhoto/Weddings/Kazmeen%20and%20Omar%20E%20Party/e0abef8c.jpg

2.)

http://i713.photobucket.com/albums/ww138/FocusPhoto/Weddings/Kazmeen%20and%20Omar%20E%20Party/2b946ecb.jpg

3.)

http://i713.photobucket.com/albums/ww138/FocusPhoto/Weddings/Kazmeen%20and%20Omar%20E%20Party/ea44c44e.jpg

4.)

http://i713.photobucket.com/albums/ww138/FocusPhoto/Weddings/Kazmeen%20and%20Omar%20E%20Party/48ffd7db.jpg

5.)

http://i713.photobucket.com/albums/ww138/FocusPhoto/Weddings/Kazmeen%20and%20Omar%20E%20Party/b337cf9b.jpg

6.)

http://i713.photobucket.com/albums/ww138/FocusPhoto/Weddings/Kazmeen%20and%20Omar%20E%20Party/0dea3aeb.jpg

7.)

http://i713.photobucket.com/albums/ww138/FocusPhoto/Weddings/Kazmeen%20and%20Omar%20E%20Party/209de26c.jpg

8.)

http://i713.photobucket.com/albums/ww138/FocusPhoto/Weddings/Kazmeen%20and%20Omar%20E%20Party/c4bbaebe.jpg

[Red Tie Photography]

I like 5 the best. 1,6, and 7 seem a bit cold to me color wise and could use a bit of a WB shift.

[Michelle Brooks Photography]

Wow, these are gorgeous. I love the richnessof the colors in the full color images, and love the tint of the bw or sepia ones (at work-- my monitor here bites, so it's hard to tell the subtlties!).. what kind of processing did you use on the bw/sepia images? Can you add your camera settings for these?

[anthonyi]

Not keen on #1 (her jewellery looks sharper than her eyes), but the rest I like.

[Milla]

Love #1, 5 and 8!

Great job!

[JBravo920]

These are great! I'm not a huge fan of the shadow from the staircase in #2, that might be a pain to clone out because of the differentiating light on the wall though, but it's still a great shot!

[Ichiban]

great set. Only pick is IMO there's too much vignetting on #3.

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Thanks for your comments and suggestions, everyone! Exactly what I was looking for. I have taken your advice and made a few changes and edited my OP with new edits.

I like 5 the best. 1,6, and 7 seem a bit cold to me color wise and could use a bit of a WB shift.

Gotcha. Did that, is it better?

what kind of processing did you use on the bw/sepia images? Can you add your camera settings for these?

Processing was all done in Lightroom. I used an action by Andie Smith called OklahomaCity and tweaked it from there. Camera was a 5D with 85L, 1/60th, f/2.8, ISO 800.

Not keen on #1 (her jewellery looks sharper than her eyes), but the rest I like.

Fixed the eyes. :)

[AlanU]

Love 'em Geno

[yummy_waffles]

#4 and #8 are spectacular!

[reddyroc007]

lovely set Geno.

[Ralph Merlino]

Nice set, you did well.

[birchtree]

#5 is my favorite, too... the rest are beautiful, too...love the rich colors and dramatic lighting, though I would like to see a little more interaction between them.

[Karizmatik]

Nice set. But I think on a few of them, your flash needs a bit of work. You have some harsh shadows cast from the stair-case, etc.

Other than that -- Nice tones, colour, sharpness & poses. All in all, a very nice shoot.