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AECZ
1st of February 2010 (Mon), 20:59
No Crop C&C please


http://i832.photobucket.com/albums/zz250/aecz/birds/birdshared/butterfly1.jpg

Meanderthal
1st of February 2010 (Mon), 22:06
For me, nice enough butterfly on a pleasing background. The original may be sharp enough, and the colors work well together. Try different crops, though.

codewarrior
4th of February 2010 (Thu), 11:06
It might just be me, but this photo seems to be asking for a square crop, with the twig coming in from the bottom left corner.

midnitejam
4th of February 2010 (Thu), 13:02
There's room to outcrop a 'triangle' composition. Nobody rarely ever uses the 'triangle' rule of composition anymore.

tonydee
5th of February 2010 (Fri), 07:22
You've got two great elements in the shot... a very well focused, attractive butterfly, and a nice smooth background with interesting contours of green, white and black. Still, IMHO something's missing - it seems too simple - and I think another twig or two creating a succession of depths, or something running front-to-back, may have lifted the picture a notch or two.

Cheers,
Tony

corkneyfonz
5th of February 2010 (Fri), 11:58
For me the twig seems to slice the frame in two. As we can't see the source of the twig, its importance is diminished. Hence crop from the bottom for a more harmonious composition.

AECZ
6th of February 2010 (Sat), 07:48
Thank you all for the comments