Just Engaged, My first coulpes shoot

[UndacovA.Fotography]

Here are 2 shots I took of these recently engaged couple, it was only a 10 shot shoot, as they didnt have much time or money, but I did it for free as I feel they are not shots worth paying for, im sort of happy with how they came out but not 100%. I just gave them a disc with the hi res Jpegs.
They are absolutly stoked with them so I guess thats the main thing.

Shot with 2 70x90cm softboxes, 1/16 power. Canon 400D and Sigma 17-70mm lens. SS1/125, F9.0, ISO 200 @70mm.

What do you think??
C&C more than welcome.

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Thanks, Adam

[Svetlana]

I like the 2nd shot - great smiles from the couple and nice lighting!

The first one is too busy to my liking, my eyes go all over the place.