I love those cookies CC Please

[diyphotography]

Got to buy some sweets for a couple that came to take their wedding albums.
I picked the specific cookie box because of the great picture on it.
Hear is my try to make that shot too
http://diyphotographystuff.info/wp-content/uploads/2010/01/the_cookie_01.JPG
and also
http://diyphotographystuff.info/wp-content/uploads/2010/01/the_cookie_05.JPG

Feel free to critic those ones.
There are some more cookies pictures in the full story:
The cookie shootout (http://diyphotographystuff.info/692/cookie-photography/)

PEACE

[PhotosGuy]

Good idea, but... In the next cookies photographs I changed the depth of field of f/5.6, That's not enough for me. If you're showing me textured cookies, then I want to see them sharper in #1.
In #2 the focus is on the chocolate, & I want the near edge to be sharp at least.

[diyphotography]

Thanks for your CC.
I took the shots in a room not lite enough (one of the rare gray days in Israel),
so I had at least in the first frame I went for the f/2.8 I also think there is something nice about it,but I understand your need for sharpness in the picture.

PEACE

[Mikeroscope]

I like #1, but number two is distracting because the chocolate bars have an uneven edge. Hows that for nit picking.

[spiralspirit]

more texture, more contrast please.