My new watermark and Logo - for kids

[mercersmoments]

I decided to give my watermark and Business card a make over :

Do you like ?

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2681/4330073304_668b18c103.jpg

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4024/4329441533_b924bb0d8f_b.jpg

[FlyingPhotog]

Just an instantaneous gut reaction: I think you only need the one little girl on the swing.

I guess I can't susupend my disbelief because I'm pretty sure those two children are going to smack into each other and someone's going home crying! ;)

It makes for a very workable watermark though.

[ggalluppi]

I love the business card, but I'm not a fan of giant watermarks...I think the text by itself as the watermark would look better. Plus you have to consider that mark on busier photographs. You're going to end up losing some detail in the tree and probably lose the birds all together.

[blondine]

personaly I love it! actually I'd like to steal it....lol.... but I won't (for now anyways...haha... just kidding...kinda...) ok I'll put my wicked personality away for now....

I think it makes a beautiful logo / card for child photography. very unique.

[scrumpy]

Bit like buying a new car and having the dealer's name all over it. It's too BIG and detracts from the excellent photograph.

[kalahmarie]

i love it!!! i think it's perfect

[mercersmoments]

Thanks guys :) I don't plan on putting it on my customer's photos, just on the samples and ones I display on line

:)

[melissaandkris]

I love it, especially for the cards but I agree about only having one of the kids on the swings. There's only one limb so it kinda looks like they are gonna crash into each other!

[Eclipse135]

2nd post ever,

I love it, but i agree with the coments about only one child (does the boy have a lolly pop, if so it intantly poped into my head that he is gona put it in the girls hair :P)

Cheers,
Daniel

[mercersmoments]

LOL @ them crashing into each other - and lollypop in the hair ! hahaha -

The boy is holding a flower, so no sticky lolly.

And for those concerned that they will crash and hurt each other, I have shortened one swing -it should look like they are on different sides now.

well that's my theory anyway !

I really want both kids on there - boys and girls :)

here ya go :

(oh and just to make it more fantasy like - we now have a chandelier, and she's kicking the stupid bird, lol )

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2702/4330904685_5b540b3802.jpg

[bsmall]

well looking at it one way it looks like the girl is on the other side, but the other way is that the boy is going to get a girl butt in the face haha

overall really nice designs :)

[FlyingPhotog]

LOL @ them crashing into each other - and lollypop in the hair ! hahaha -

The boy is holding a flower, so no sticky lolly.

And for those concerned that they will crash and hurt each other, I have shortened one swing -it should look like they are on different sides now.

well that's my theory anyway !

I really want both kids on there - boys and girls :)

here ya go :

(oh and just to make it more fantasy like - we now have a chandelier, and she's kicking the stupid bird, lol )

So you ask for a critique and then decide to mock those that bothered, huh?

Well Done...

Best of luck :rolleyes:

[mercersmoments]

well looking at it one way it looks like the girl is on the other side, but the other way is that the boy is going to get a girl butt in the face haha

hahaha !!! these two can't win, poor kids ! lol

So you ask for a critique and then decide to mock those that bothered, huh

ahhh, No - actually I was laughing at myself as well, no mock intended !

[ferretkingdom]

I think it's fine as a business card, but rather distracting to the photos as a watermark

[sebr]

I really like the card (original version), but the watermark is too much of a distraction for me.