Storyboard

[flomdesigns]

What do you think of this storyboard, I am thinking about offering this one at my studio.
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4023/4339895382_3db98d9566_o.jpg
I got it from Andie Smith Designs, http://www.andiesmithdesigns.com

I really would love some feedback!

[A.Tan]

I'm not sure about the photo in the middle, maybe 4 pictures are sufficient.

[flomdesigns]

Okay thanks...I kinda like it though adds depth

[Kristy]

I like story boards that progress along like a film strip. This kind of layout makes my eyes go crazy and they don't know where to look.... so I don't really focus on any of the images until I force my eyes to stop and land somewhere...

On a film strip style layout.. the eyes naturall progress from right to left and pause at each image to absorb the scene of it..

I may be weird... but thats' just my 2-cents on the subject. :) Cute shots though. :)

[Grimlock]

I like story boards that progress along like a film strip. This kind of layout makes my eyes go crazy and they don't know where to look.... so I don't really focus on any of the images until I force my eyes to stop and land somewhere...

Totally agree.
As for this was my initial reaction too.

The shots aren't bad. The layout just needs work, IMO.

[flomdesigns]

thanks guys...maybe this storyboard would be better for a wedding