Practice shoot

[kiddsoles]

Looking for criticism! Composition/lighting/ etc thanks

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4020/4345142732_e5317da227_o.jpg

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4016/4344403037_efa59e4c00_o.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2775/4345142630_a491d20338_o.jpg

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4065/4344402779_060e6e3756_o.jpg

[pickupman92]

with the hair I'd maybe redden up the lips a little. I like the less saturated effect, but I'm curious as to what increased over normal saturation would look like as well.

I like #1 the best. sorry I can't give more criticism...

[PixelPusher]

Looks like a slight yellow cast from my monitor. Some of the highlights in her hair have a yellow tint from my monitor. Looks like a fun shoot, I like #1 & #3 best. Thanks for sharing.

[vk2gwk]

There is something not quite right with the white balance here..... I think - if you shot RAW - a little bit of experimenting with the sliders could get that right.
Other than that... very nice shots. Only #3... I would like that one better with her eyes open.

[Deeners]

I like them, except the last one her eye lash is coming off. After looking at them again, there is some thing going on with the lashes on all of them.

[kiddsoles]

thanks guys.. i was trying to go for a little more vintage yellowish effect on the photo.. but i will correct them and repost

[mattaura]

thanks guys.. i was trying to go for a little more vintage yellowish effect on the photo.. but i will correct them and repost

I got what you were trying to do here as far as color cast I personally liked it. I think it works well.