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mattaura
10th of February 2010 (Wed), 06:16
Hey guys and gals, I'm looking for some critique/feedback on some of my photos. Always interested in hearing what others like or don't like so that I can improve. Thanks!

#1

http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs27/i/2009/136/e/e/Innocence_by_mattaura.jpg

#2

http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2010/035/5/d/Orbicus_by_mattaura.jpg

#3

http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs51/f/2009/326/a/6/Rainbow__s_Edge_by_mattaura.jpg

#4

http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs50/i/2009/309/1/c/Reaching_by_mattaura.jpg

#5

http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs50/i/2009/315/1/1/Let__s_Ride_by_mattaura.jpg

#6

http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2010/007/f/6/Heinz_57_by_mattaura.jpg

#7

http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs50/i/2009/315/d/c/Romeo_by_mattaura.jpg

#8

http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs50/i/2009/315/c/4/Wet_Beak_by_mattaura.jpg

snyderman
10th of February 2010 (Wed), 07:18
all are nice. Great color, focus, WB. Tack sharp focus in all as well. Good 'mix' of subject matter. Really liked #3. Well done!

dave

sweideman81
10th of February 2010 (Wed), 07:36
#4 is beautiful.

vpnd
10th of February 2010 (Wed), 09:42
like em.... except my personal view is that NO ONE should ever shoot a rainbow again...;)

corkneyfonz
10th of February 2010 (Wed), 11:34
Exceptional quality and to nit pick would seem petty. Carry on the good work.

Mu Eugene
10th of February 2010 (Wed), 11:51
Nice set.

#3 and #7 are particularly interesting to me as I am in the process of learning further image manipulation. Lens filter for #3 and HDR for #7? Would love to see original pics and like to know how you got there.

Flo
10th of February 2010 (Wed), 11:51
7&8 are really great..

baraynavab
10th of February 2010 (Wed), 12:00
Heinz one is really good

bongo fury
10th of February 2010 (Wed), 12:04
Looks like you have a knack for stock photography...

stsva
10th of February 2010 (Wed), 13:39
Very nice shots. I did think the horse didn't show to best advantage in the first shot. I'd recommend trying something like this crop.

mattaura
10th of February 2010 (Wed), 21:28
thanks all!

like em.... except my personal view is that NO ONE should ever shoot a rainbow again...;)

haha..touche'

stunt4949
10th of February 2010 (Wed), 21:42
Very nice shots. I did think the horse didn't show to best advantage in the first shot. I'd recommend trying something like this crop.

Agree!

I really the sunflower and the motorcycle. The perspective of the motorcycle is great!

PP is done "just right" - color balance, sharpness, contrast...

Great job!

FelixDeSouze
11th of February 2010 (Thu), 06:31
The cropped version of the horse is nice :)

matonanjin
11th of February 2010 (Thu), 07:38
While the original horse portrait, I agree, would be improved by different a different crop, I'm not crazy about the new one either. Horse portraits, like human portraits, should not be cropped at a joint. I don't like the crop at the knees. Just my opinion.

I am on a computer that I can't download the image on and manipulate. My version may not be any better. But I think if one cropped vertically just behind the withers and horizonally between the knees and shoulders it might work. This is going to leave the eyes in the 1/3 area.

Bottom line, I like the image!:) The snow really gives this portrait an emotion.